haha...ahh I might be the mean one here but I gotta crit you hard here it'll help you out with your other pieces. I make these mistakes also we all do :D I like those ones on top but phillip...the arch...Look at the archway on your second piece the one in the very front above your character. Pull up references of archeways if you have to and put in a perspective grid if you are dealing with a piece that has more perspective like this one. The problem is those archways in the back are pretty symetrical compared to the one in front which is lopsided...it looks like it's twisting right now which it shouldn't be doing.
Watch your scale with the figure also in front. Itleast to me anyway he is looking huge right now compared to the other figures in the back. Honestly I thought the placement worked better in the first one.
Anywho though you got cool stuff going on also . The color schemes is much brighter from your other work and it's working well in this. I see you borrowing those colors from dreamworks and Pussandboots and it's working. Just get in those grids on this piece and also that second. I know your working hard on freelance also but you could make these pretty good.
These look really nice.
ReplyDeletehaha...ahh I might be the mean one here but I gotta crit you hard here it'll help you out with your other pieces. I make these mistakes also we all do :D I like those ones on top but phillip...the arch...Look at the archway on your second piece the one in the very front above your character. Pull up references of archeways if you have to and put in a perspective grid if you are dealing with a piece that has more perspective like this one. The problem is those archways in the back are pretty symetrical compared to the one in front which is lopsided...it looks like it's twisting right now which it shouldn't be doing.
ReplyDeleteWatch your scale with the figure also in front. Itleast to me anyway he is looking huge right now compared to the other figures in the back. Honestly I thought the placement worked better in the first one.
Anywho though you got cool stuff going on also . The color schemes is much brighter from your other work and it's working well in this. I see you borrowing those colors from dreamworks and Pussandboots and it's working. Just get in those grids on this piece and also that second. I know your working hard on freelance also but you could make these pretty good.